Michael's+Descriptive+Writing

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Whush~ Whush~" The wind blows as gently as gentleman whispering. "Sniff... Sniff Sniff..." the air smells very good. I went there when I was in 7th grade. It was huge and it was so beautiful so that I could remember clearly. There were many tall, humongous trees on the side of the road so it is a natural air refresher. I’ve never seen this wonderful spectacle before so I was more exited about the trip. After arrived at the destination, we unpacked our luggage and went out to look over the how the villa looked like. Villa looked like a humongous rich guy’s house. There were 4 bikes inside the garage of the villa my cousin and I went out to look around with riding a bike. We went through the forest and all the way down the street; there were tall trees besides the street. It was amazing. Also there were chipmunks on the sides of the road and I watched him and he ran away with lightening speed. After it ran away, we continued our journey again. After finishing the bike trip, we went back to the villa to have some dinner. The dinner was barbeque. The barbeque meats were more looked like piece of flowers on the grill rather then a red bloody meat. The taste was wonderful and it felt like the meat was melting in my mouth like an ice-cream. While eating the dinner, we saw a deer which was staring at us and we took a picture with it. I hope we go there again.

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